Rate and edit my YuGiOh burn deck?

Question

this is my Burn/stall YuGiOh deck;

Monsters:

1x Blowback Dragon

1x Golden Ladybug

3x Apprentice magician

2x Old Vindictive magician

3x Solar flare dragon

3x Hyena

1x Cloudian - sheep cloud

1x Stealth bird

1x Mask of darkness

1x Sangan

1x Penguin soldier

1x Gyroid

1x Neo-spacian grand mole

1x Marshmallon

Magic:

2x Wave-motion cannon

1x monster reborn

1x Scapegoat

1x Level limit - area B

1x Swords of revealing light

1x Nightmare's steelcage

1x Mystical space typhoon

1x Lightning vortex

1x Heavy storm

Traps:

2x Secret barrel

2x Just desserts

1x Ojama trio

1x Gravity bind

1x Black horn of heaven

1x Draining shield

1x Dark Bribe

1x Negate attack

1x Magic cylinder

1x Curse of anubis

1x Ordeal of a traveller

1x Bottemless trap hole

1x Sakuretsu armour

well, thats the deck, i need any edits to be tournement legal, i am also getting des koala's soon to go in.

thanks for any help ^^

Rob

Answer 1

You have a lot of wasteful cards in there, I assume it's because you can't get your hands on certain cards.  Also please write down the number of monsters, spells, and traps you have.  You have about 55 cards in your deck I don't feel like double checking my counting.  Your deck should be quick, with the stealh birds or solar flare dragons.  

-negate attack

-ordeal of a traveller

-curse of anubis

-draining shield

-cloudian sheep cloud

-golden ladybug

-3 apprentices

-2 old vindictives

-penguin soldier

-3 Hyenas

-Gyroid

-Sakuretsu armor

-Blowback Dragon

-black horn of heaven

+3 UFO Turtles

+ceasefire

+2 stealth birds

+3 des koalas

+2 dark bribes of solemns

+wave-motion cannon

+spirit reaper

Answer 2

you got a lots of traps that maybe be a problem be cos if you meet a deck with jinzo or Royal Decree you can't use them.

remove traps or get a way to defend your self