Rate and fix my macro deck?

Question

monsters=20

3x cauis the shadow monarch

1x raiza the storm monarch

3x d.d survivor

3x d.d warrior

3x d.d. scout plane

1x d.d warrior lady

1x banisher of radiance

1x gre maju da eiza

2x kycoo the ghost destroyer

2x exiled force

spells=14

3x dimensional fissure

2x nobleman of crossout

2x d.d.r diffrent dimension reincarnation

2x enemy controller

1x brain control

1x smashing ground

1x lightning vortex

1x mystical space typhoon

1x reinforcement of the army

traps=10

3x macro cosmos

2x sakuretsu armor

2x bottomless trap hole

1x torreintal tribute

1x karma cut

1x return from the diffrent dimension

Answer 1

get the exile force out of the deck and put 2 necrofaces instead also and that carma cut must be out because in this deck you have no cards to discard.The basic strategy is to bring monsters again and again.Find 2 soul absorbptions and put them in.With card you will get 500 LP for every card that goes to the remove side.Perfect you will be just inderstructible!!!!

Answer 2

8/10. I have Mystical Space Typhoon and Brain Control.