Rate and fix my yugioh spellcaster deck!?

Question

monsters:21

1x magician of faith

2x dark magician

3x gemini elf

3x kycoo the ghost destroyer

2x skilled dark magician

2x gravekeeper's spy

1x injection fairy lily

1x breaker the magical destroyer

1x dark magician of chaos

1x dark magician girl

2x magician's valkyria

1x silent magician lv4

1x silent magician lv 8

spell/magic:14

1x dark magician curtain

1x dedication through light and darkness

1x enemy controller

1x heavy storm

1x level up!

1x magical dimensions

1x mystic space typhoon

1x shrink

1x lightning vortex

1x shield crush

1x smashing ground

1x mage power

1x united we stand

1x mystic plasma zone

Trap:9

2x sakuretsu armor

1x mirror force

1x torrential tribute

2x negate attack

1x magic cylinder

1x magician's circle

1x widespread ruin

and maybe 1x draining shield

Can someone please tell me which cards i should take out and which i should put in!

Answer 1

I'M SORRY BUT YOU NEED TO WORK ON YOUR DECK,(YOU CAN EVEN LOOK AT MINE ON THIS WEBSITE TO COMPARE AT"HOW GOOD IS MY DECK"), EVEN I CAN BEAT YOU WITHOUT ATTACKING!!!! JUST MAKE SURE YOU STUDY YOUR CARDS!!! - COWDY

OVERALL 4.5/10