Rate and/or fix my jinzo/machine deck?

Question

monsters- 21

2 - blue thunder T-45

2 - cyber dragon

2 - cyber valley

2 - cyber phoenix

1 - D.D. warrior lady

1 - drillroid

1 - gyroid

3 - Jinzo

3 - Jinzo returner

2 - mechanicalchaser

1 - Reflect bounder

1 - Snipe hunter

magic- 17

1 - book of moon

1 - brain control

1 - enemy controller

1 - foolish burial

1 - future fusion

1 - heavy storm

1 - lightning vortex

1 - limiter removal

1 - monster reborn

1 - mystical space typhoon

1 - overload fusion

1 - pot of avarice

1 - premature burial

2 - shrink

1 - smashing ground

1 - swords of revealing light

traps- 3

1 - magic drain

1 - mirror force

1 - torrential tribute

total- 41

fusions- 3

2 - chimeratech overdragon

1 - cyber twin dragon

This deck is my otk jinzo/machine deck, I wanted to play dekoichi's and a card trooper or to, but i dont know what to take out for it because i really don't want to play with a deck containing over 41 cards, so please rate my deck and tell me your opinions

Answer 1

it is not to bad but you should change the roids and the d.d warrior lady to the three machine kings i know there names are machine king prototype, perfect machine king, and just machine king  you can buy or just look at them at this website

Answer 2

great deck i think idk if you should use a magic drain maybe a magic jammer would be better you really need a magic counter.  Also i like the dd warrior lady but i think the card trooper would be better in place of her.  Great deck though i would give it a 9/10

Answer 3

5.5/10

monsters- 21

2 - Blawback Dragon

2 - cyber dragon

3 - cyber valley

2 - cyber phoenix

3 - Jinzo

3 - Jinzo returner

2 - Hex

1x Morphingjar

2x Armagedon knight

1x Jinzo - Lord

magic- 13

1 - book of moon

1 - brain control

1 - future fusion

1 - heavy storm

1 - lightning vortex

1 - monster reborn

1 - mystical space typhoon

1 - overload fusion

1 - premature burial

1 - shrink

2 - Fires of doomsday

1 Scapegoat (for valley - draw 2 cards)

traps- 5

1 - mirror force

1 - torrential tribute

3- Saku

fusions- 3

2 - chimeratech overdragon

1 - Twin

Answer 4

your deck is really good i will gie it 10/10 and i think you can take it to a tournament and place first place.

Answer 5

8/10

Answer 6

Monsters: 22

3 Jinzo

2 Cyber Dragon

2 Blue Thunder T-45

2 Drillroid

1 D.D. Warrior Lady

1 Snipe Hunter

2 Dekoichi the Battlechanted Locomotive

2 Cyber Phoenix

1 Morphing Jar

3 Jinzo - Returner

1 Card Trooper

2 Cyber Valley

Spells: 14

1 Future Fusion

1 Overload Fusion

1 Limiter Removal

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Smashing Ground

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Brain Control

1 Swords of Revealing Light

3 Shrink

Traps: 4

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Dark Bribe

Total: 40 cards

Fusion Deck: 4

2 Cyber Twin Dragon

2 Chimeratech Overdragon