Rate/fix my deck please??

Question

monsters: 20

2x white horned dragon

dark magician of chaos

3x caius the shadow monarch

2x kuraz the light monarch

d.d.m. - different dimension master

snipe hunter

3x d.d. survivor

3xd.d. scout plane

morphing jar

spirit reaper

marshmallon

gren maju da eiza

traps:8

3x macro cosmos

3x escape from the dark dimension

return from the different dimension

d.d. dynamite

spells:13

3x dimensional fissure

3x gravekeeper's servant

3x different dimension reincarnation

2x foolish burial

2x soul absorption

the meaning of this deck is to get a lot of monsters removed and then special summon them

Answer 1

I would take out some of the monarchs for golden homonclulus and anothe d.d.m.

Answer 2

you could try the dark creator. remove from play one monster in your grave to special summon one monster from your grave. you could use dark nephthys. special summon it and start taking down your opponents field with it

Answer 3

Nice Deck 8/10

Answer 4

looks good but make sure your not using banned cards