Rate / fix my yugioh dark deck?

Question

monsters:

1 darklord zerato

1 darknight parshath

3 peten the dark clown

1 destiny hero dasher

1 elemental hero stratos

1 destiny hero fear monger

1 magical merchant

1 doomsday horror

1 morphing jar

1 dark magician of chaos

1 armagedon knight

1 mystic tomato

1 dark grepher

1 snipe hunter

1 dark nepthys

spells:

1 lightning vortex

1 sword of reveiling lights

1 fires of doomsday

1 scapegoat

2 d.d.r

1 foolish burial

1 mst

1 monster reborn

1 heavy storm

1 premature burial

1 the beginning of the end

1 enemy controller

1 brain control

traps:

1 magic cilinder

1 dark illusion

1 escape from the dark dimesion

1 torrential tribute

Answer 1

-1 escape from the dark dimesion

-1 magic cilinder

+3 sakuretsu armor

-1 dark illusion

+1 Bottomless trap hole

+1 royal decree

-1 fires of doomsday

-1 enemy controller

-1 beggingin of the end

+1 book of moon

+1 soul exchange

+1 Reinforcement of the Army

+1 Nobleman of Crossout

+1 destiny draw (any free draws in yugioh results in very largely increased chances of winning)

-3 Peten the dark clown

+2 mystic tomato

+1 d hero dasher

+1 d hero disk commander (great draw power)

+1 d hero fear monger

+3 d hero diamond dude (this is optional to you: it is a great card to get your magics out a lot faster)

+1 treeborn frog (free special summon/tribute food)

otherwise this is 7/10 deck, consider my answer and add some cards it will be tournament ready :D YOU NEED MORE DRAW POWER

Answer 2

8/10 bt take out elemental hero stratos it dosnt match the rest of cards

and pt desting hero diomand dude in its place and you'll be winning games quickly and add a few more traps

Answer 3

When i go to my local tourney theres this guy that almost always wins i think his deck goes like this:

3 Dark armed dragon

2 Darklord Zerato

1 Dark Nephtheys

1 Dark grepher

2 Armeggedon knight

1 Snipe Hunter

3 Cyber valley

2 Destiny Hero malicious

1 Destiny Hero Dasher

2 Destiny Hero Fear monger

1 Destiny Hero disk commander

1 Elemtal hero stratos

Not sure about the spell and traps just go to google and type in perfect circle dark armed return.

Answer 4

7/10

Answer 5

i have darklord zerato dark deck mine 9/10 yours 6/10 or 7/10

Answer 6

it is a good deck