Rate/fix my yugioh deck? i also need a name for it?

Question

for fun deck:

i havent seen a deck out there like this yet so i made it.

Monsters:

Il blud

zombie master x2

spirit reaper

ryu kokki x2

pyramid turtle x3

despair from the dark x3

card trooper

dd crow x2

dd scout plain x2

dark armed dragon x2

marshmallon

snipe hunter

traps:

torrential tribute

mirrior force

crush card

phoenix wing blast x2

dark bribe x2

magic:

book of life x3

lighting vortex x2

allure of darknessx2

monster reborn

premature burial

trade in x2

call of the mummy x2

heavy storm

reasoning x2

sword of revealing light

side deck:

return from the dark dimension

mystical space typoon

nobleman of crossout

jinzo

scapegoats

dark nephthys x2

dark dark grepher

armageddon night x2

dark magician of chaos

dark creator

cyber valley

elemental hero stratos

trade in

i also need a name for it

Answer 1

It's about a 6/10. Decent, but definitely not good. For the name how about "Darkbilly"? It's a darkness-themed billy deck, so I guess Darkbilly fits. Yes. I now bestow this THE DARKBILLY DECK!!!

Answer 2

its a zombie swarm with dark armed dragon. not the most original thing in the world, more like taking a great deck and ramming it into a mediocre deck making a mess. i havnt ran this kinda deck before, but off the top of my head it wont work. the whole point of zombie swarm is to fill the field quickly from the graveyard, but with allures and dad putting them out of play would make it extremely slow, and pretty much get you stuck.

zombie swarm is all about speed, and dad is control. mixing them slows zombie down, and limits dad because you dont have the right support. you need to have a dedicate deck for each to make them work perfectly.