Rate/fix my yugioh deck out deck

Question

im running a deck out eck oh and srry cause theres this guy named that goes there so plz rate/fix it

Monsters-16

needle wormx3

penguin soldierx3

Des koalaX3

Morphing Jar #2 X3

Destiny hero-defenderX2

morhing jar

marshmallon

5star and over

3-monsters

Kuraz the light monarchX3

Traps-9

skull invitationX2

sakuetsu armor

Gravity bind

rising energy

metal reflect slime

magic cylinder

trap hole

shadow spell

magics-13(spells-13 whatever)[stupid magic the card game sued cause not that many people play there game]

card destruction

brain control

gravekeepers servantX2

monster reborn

fires of doomsday

pot of avaricex2

swords of reaviling light

hammershot

soul exchange

premature burial

fires of doomsday

Answer 1

Also to my last post.
I live in las vegas nevada and I took that deck to regional's and I beat glads and samurais ( this was before synchros ) and the only reason I lost was because of a monarch deck and a self destruct deck so I got 16th place.

Answer 2

Its looks good. The best part about deck out decks is that they are capable of back the opponent into a corner and making them play reckless.

Heres mine ( Insect Burn deck )
though not all are bugs

Monsters x 22

Under 4 stars

Morphing Jar x 1
4 starred lady bug x 1
Morphing Jar 2 x 1
Destiny Hero - Defender x 1  
Man-Eater Bug x 3
Needle Worm x 3
Neo-Spacian Glow moss x 2
Aztekipede, The Worm Warrior x 1
Chainsaw insect x 3
Hiro's Shadow scout x 1
Pinch Hopper x 1
Penguin soldier x 1
Night Assailant x 1

Over 5
Doom Dozer x 2


Traps x 11
Bottomless trap hole x 1
Dimensional prison x 1
Scrap-Iron Scarecrow x 1
Defense Draw x
Drop off x 2
Drastic Drop off x 1
Null and Void x 1
Mirror Force x 1
Big Burn x 1
DNA Checkup x 1

Magic x 13
Swords of revealing light x 1
Book of moon x 1
Lighting Vortex x 1
Book of Eclipse x 1
Heavy storm x 1
Pot of Avarice x 1
Giant Trunade x 1
Monster Reborn x 1
Card Destruction x 1
Gravekeeper's servant
Dark core x 1
Paralyzing chain x 2

Side deck
Parasite parasides
Defender
Penguin soldier
Brain crusher
Millennium scorpion

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