Rate/fix this yugioh darkness deck please?

Question

Monsters:24

Cauis the shadow monarch x2

D-hero Dasher x1

D-hero Defender x1

Gorz emmisary of darkness x1

Dark Nephthys x1

Necro gardna x2

Morphing Jar x1

Armegaddon knight x3

Dark Arm Dragon x2

Snipe Hunter x1

Kycoo the ghost destroyer x1

Obsidian dragon x2

Dark valkyrie x1

Jinzo x1

The dark creator x1

Prometheus, King of the Shadows x1

Sangan x1

Magic 11

Dark eruption x1

Premature burial x1

Foolish burial x1

Monster reborn x1

Brain control x1

Heavy storm x1

lightning vortex x1

reasoning x2

Enemy controller x1

MST x1

Soul release x1

Doomday Fire x1

Traps 9

Transmigration prophercy x1

Torrential Tribute x1

Bottomless trapholes x3

Sakuretsu armor x1

Mirrior force x1

Magical Cylinder x1

Dust tornado x1

Answer 1

try making dark world or dad

Answer 2

you only have to take away jinzo, sangan, MST, morphing jar and 1 armageddon knight. enjoy :)

Answer 3

It's pretty decent, but I would add 1 more morphing jar since their effect is pretty good.