Rate more of my lyrics 1-10?

Question

Release the stress with the only thing im blessed with

a paper and a pen thats the only thing im left with

spiritual meditation through my words of elevation

influence the population

so the future generation will have a better education

the misinterpretation of hip hop has got these kids heads locked

let me teach them the greatest lesson,

hip hop is a caring mother shes a blessing

in disguise, hiding in the underground cuz of corporate lies

manipulated and beaten by her husband the TV

and us children are sittin there watching her bleed

cant my peers see that shes dying slowly?

how you let your mom suffer in the hands of a phony

us who love her wont even bother and kill the mother ******

then live a happy life influenced by OUR mother

cant you see it clearly that we cant hate one another

cuz we are all sisters and brothers

if we all realize this our problems will cease to exist

cuz knowledge of unity will overpower the evil spiritual entities.

Rate 1-10 as usual, leave a comment.

Answer 1

I'll give you an 8, much better than the garbage I read Yahoo. The other people that talked down on you listen to that soulja boy garbage.  

Answer 2

ugh this be no good you suck you is horribul uggh  

Answer 3

dude you are really good like my self but I am only 14 ... this is good I will give it 8 because it has a simple rhythmic structure the ending could be a little better ... hey if you have a microphone and can flow we can collaborate on a track I will produce the beat and we both collab on it ... hit me up if you have any questions or wanna hear my stuff  

Answer 4

4..but then again I listen to southern rap.

Answer 5

You shoudlnt have your lyrics on the internet because someone could steal them.

Answer 6

I love it man. 8.5/10. Good rhyming.

Answer 7

the endin needs a little work gotta make exsist and entities flow in cant jus force that in there ya know..

but um i give it an 8 and uh might not be smart to post lyric son a website.. popele might steal em

Answer 8

5-6 amp it up a little bit. I see what type of lyricist u are. the poetic type try adding more slick words in there. Try adding more of a flow instead even tho ur talking try not to make it sound like ur really talking u get what i mean??? but its okay.

Answer 9

7.5/