Rate my 'Monarch' Control Deck!?

Question

I'm trying to make a control deck... I'm going to buy the cards so i though i might just ask the community to rate it and maybe help me improve it...

Deck Cards(43):

Monster Cards(20):

Thestalos the Firestorm Monarch x2

Caius the Shadow Monarch x2

Raiza the Storm Monarch x2

Mobius the Frost Monarch x2

Granmarg the Rock Monarch x2

Kuraz the Light Monarch x2

Zaborg the Thunder Monarch x2

Destiny Hero Defender x3

Big Shield Gardna x3

Magic Cards(10):

Monster Reborn x1

Premature Burial x1

Brain Control x2

Cost Down x3

Lightning Vortex x1

United We Stand x1

Soul Exchange x1

Trap Cards(13):

Karma Cut x1

Raigeki Breakx1

Solemn Judgment x3

Magic Jammer x1

Trap Jammer x1

Sokuretsu Armor x1

Widespread Ruins x1

Mirror Force x1

Torrential Tribute x1

Bottomless Trap Hole x2

Fusion Cards(0):

Synchro Cards(0):

Answer 1

Its decent but it would be so hard to use considering it would take u around 3 turns to draw a defender, a big shield gardna, or a cost down. i reccomend taking out the fire monarch since its kinda useless. i would also take out 1 or 2 big shield garndas, since ur opponent can do crazy lp dmg due to its switch into atk mode effect. on a scale from 1 to 10, 7.

Answer 2

-trap jammer

-3 cost down

-2 granmarg

+2 foolish burial

+treeborn frog

+1 soul exchange

-1 brain control (limited to 1)

hope this helps