Rate my Beatdown Deck?

Question

Monsters

(22)

Gearfried the Iron Knight

Skilled Dark Magician x2

Zombyra the Dark

Luster Dragon x3

Gemini Elf

Lord of D

Blue Eyes White Dragon x2

Summoned Skull

Opticlops

Mobius the Frost Monarch

Elemental Hero Sparkman

Nin Kin Dog

Kaiser Sea Horse

Barrel Dragon

Slate Warrior

Twinheaded Beast

Dark Blade

Goblin Attack Force

Spell

(11)

Giant Trunade

Premature Barial

Mysitcal Space Typhoon

Heavy Storm

Lightning Vortex x2

Brain Control

Flute of Summoning Dragon

Swords of Revealing Light

Monster Reborn

Hammer Shot

Traps

(7)

Threatening Roar

Sakuretsu Armor x2

Bottomless Traphole

Torrential Tribue

Rope of Life

Magic Cylinder

Answer 1

i'll say 8.5/10

because your offence card are toooo  strong, but card effect, are little... Nice cards tough

Answer 2

9.5/10

mirror force

and no elemental hero sparkman

Answer 3

make a normal monster beatdown deck. they have more support. eg. justi-break, non-spellcasting area, birthright, dust barrier etc.