Rate my Dark Nephthys Deck?

Question

Monsters (21)

8 Star

(3) Dark Nephtys

(1) The Dark Creator

(1) DMOC

6 Star

(1) Jinzo

(1) Chaius

(2) Destiny Hero Dasher

4 Star/Lower

(3) Gravekeeper Spy

(1) Dark Grepher

(1) Armageddon Knight

(3) Cyber Valley

(1) Spirit Reaper

(1) Morphing Jar

(1) Marshmallon

(1) Sangan

Magic (12)

(1) Monster Reborn

(1) Brain Control

(1) Premature Burial

(1) Book of Moon

(1) Lightning Vortex

(1) Allure of Darkness

(1) Giant Trunade

(1) Heavy Storm

(1) Mystical Space Typhoon

(1) Reasoning

(1) Enemy Controller

(1) Trade-In

Traps (7)

(1) Mirror force

(1) Divine Wrath

(2) Escape from different dimension

(1) Torrential Tribute

(1) Phoenix Wing Blast

(1) Return from Different Dimension

Answer 1

This Deck isn't bad, but try to make some improvements to it.  If you think of sending Dark Monsters to the Graveyard, then you may want to change that.  If you're using Return from the Different Dimension and Escape from Different Dimension, which by the way it's called Escape from the Dark Dimension, then you might want to use Dimensional Fissure or something to remove your Dark monsters from play and then bring them back.

Answer 2

hey, I like you deck, it's will build, though it could still use a little fix.

-cyber valley

+phantom of chaos

-spy

+allure

-reasoning

+trade-in

-divine wrath(side it)

+D.D.R

-return fromD.D

+bottomless

-2Escape fromD.D

+2 solemn judgment