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Rate my Lyrics 1-10, Pretty old notepad i found.?

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part of the onslew but i became everything that they said that i'd never amount to

looking for my quote on quote significant other like The Bicentennial Man and i found you

like half is my sense of purpose and the rest is sheer ego

this is just incomparable speaking like there he goes,

conveying my inner working and there's not one alike as far as the interior schemes go,

chasing a fools gold,in all apparance they say its seldom seen oh!

i just wanna hear my name resonated from bleechers,and not wake up to say it was mearly a dream no

padlocking my heart and ignoring the tendencies to wear it on my sleeve so

when i'm hovering above the clouds,i hear no interference with my clear notes

honesty, it's like they ain't seem to wear it like yesteryear's clothes,thats why i only put my dependency in i,

re-consider with your eyes,can't you see them serendipities in the sky? like the vibrance is you

where to aim,toward the stars?,it's like everything is in alignment with you

got me two stepping outside of the box,penning 16's shying from the tiresome coot

excuse me if this comes across as a pinnacle moment like realizing the truth,but this music is therapeutic

a get back to those who said i was born with derelict uses

i just follow my intuition like i wasn't scheduled to do this,the truth is,i ain't precisioned to explain

i ain't gonna act like something i'm not, for them that'll be the day like Jimmy Mcclaine

in the process of recording this,i put them pessimists on speed dial like i did it again

its pretty old work, probably 6-7 months ago. Tell me what ya think

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  1. It's a little choppy to read and follow - I'd have to peep the delivery.

    6.5/10 for complexity and word play.

    If the delivery is good, I'd say 7.5/10


  2. As Charles Barkley would say, That's Terrrrrble.

    On a scale 1-10, its a 1, id give it 0 if i could though, it seems to have NO flow and who cares if you know some big words...

  3. love it

  4. i kinda scanned through it. Its better than anything i can do cuz i suck at rapping so imma go with a 6-7/10

  5. Sorry, but I lost interest after the first sentence.

  6. 5/10. Practice makes perfect

  7. sorry man, i love that you wanna make rap more intellegent and all but work on your skill a little more.....

  8. on a scale of 1 to 10???    .05

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