Rate my Magic The Gathering Deck!?!?!?

Question

x4 Battlegate Mimic- Creature-Shapeshifter

x4 Puncture Blast-Instant

x4 Double Cleave-Instant

x4 Duergar Assailant- Creature

x13 Mountain-Basic Land

x4 Hobgoblin Drgoon-Creature-Goblin Knight

x4 Scourge of the Nobilis-Enchantment

x9 Plain- Basic Land

x4 Flame Jab- Sorcery

x4 Fire at Will

x4 Duegar Mine-Captain

x1 RARE Nobilis of War-Creature Spirit Avatar

x2 Rare rekindled Flame

I just started playing today my friend gave me a deck of his cards

Answer 1

Figure of destiny and balefire liege.

Balefire liege works especially well with flame jab, as it is potentially 8 damage. Flame javelin is also good, I would take out fire at will and put in some flame javelins and incinerates.

Answer 2

Before I forget, on behalf of the DCI, I'd like to welcome you to Magic: The Gathering. May your journey be filled with wonderful stories and times that you can share and treasure.

Now, let's have a go at disassembling the deck...

First of all, Why don't you have the liege of your color? Balefire liege is scary. You need 4x Balefire liege, and you may ditch your Duergar Mine Captains for them - The ability to give all your creatures +2/+2, as well as allow you to shock your opponent whenever you play a red spell, and gain you 3 life whenever you play a white spell is unparalleled.

Where are the Figure of Destiny's? You need at least three, if not four of these. These start off as a 1/1, but can grow to a 8/8 with flying and first strike. Ditch your Duergar Assailants for the Figures.

Hobgoblin Dragoon? Not cool - too slow, too costly. These will be ditched for some better burn spells, such as 4x Flame Javelin.

Puncture Blast is gone for 4x Rift Bolt, because Rift bolt does the same damage without wither, for R and one turn in suspension - Great card for you, especially when you consider that three damage is more than enough to deal with most creatures in this format.

Rekindled Flame? As much as I like it, it doesn't really fit in this deck, because you don't have a way to empty their hand fast enough for rekindled flame to be anything more than a 4 mana burn spell for 4. Ditch them for Incinerate or Shard Volley.

Flame Jab - Great choice. These stay in.

You also need better creatures. The mimics are fine, but they are marginal at best. They should be replaced with Countryside Crusher or something similar.

All in all, it's a fine deck for a first attempt. Keep up the good work, and keep playing magic.

Answer 3

5/10

Answer 4

Add in Balefire Liege.  It will pump up your red and white guys while gaining life and dealing damage.

Switch the Assailants with Figure of Destiny.

Trade Fire at Will for Fireball

But as of right now, I would rate this 7/10.  It's pretty fast but may have problems with the late game if you don't get the cards you need.

Welcome to the game and Have Fun