Rate my Monarch Control Deck?

Question

Monster Cards:

Mobiusx2

Caiusx3

Thestalosx1

Raizax1

Gravekeepers Spyx3

D.D Warrior Ladyx1

Snipe Hunterx1

Jinzox1

Card Trooperx1

Cyber Dragonx2

Treeborn Frogx1

Dekoichi The Battlechanted Locomotivex1

Spirit Reaperx1

Marshmallonx1

=20

Spell Cards:

Brain Controlx1

Heavy Stormx1

Mstx1

Enemy Controllerx3

Monster Rebornx1

Allure Of Darknessx2

Premature Burialx1

Soul Exchangex2

=12

Trap Cards:

Divine Wrath

Mirror Force

3 Raigeki Break....Will Soon Be Solomn Judgment

Torrential Tribute

I had a Monarch Macro but its hard to depend on macro cosmos and dimensional fissure cause when those didnt come there was a very slim chance to win.

Answer 1

6/10

it's a nice build but not quite solid enough...

I'll help you improve it ;D

monsters : 21

Mobiusx2

Caiusx3

Raiza

Thestalosx1

Gravekeepers Spyx2

D.D Warrior Lady

Snipe Hunter

Card Trooper

Cyber Dragonx2

Treeborn Frog

Dekoichi The Battlechanted Locomotive

Spirit Reaper

Marshmallonx1

Sangan

Morphing Jar

Breaker the Magical Warrior

Spell Cards: 11

Brain Control

Heavy Stormx1

Mstx1

Enemy Controllerx3

Monster Rebornx1

Premature Burialx1

Soul Exchangex2

Pot of Avarice

Trap Cards: 8

Dust Tornado

Mirror Force

Solomn Judgment

Torrential Tribute

Sakuretsu Armor x2

Bottomless Trap Hole

Threatning Roar