Rate my Yu- Gi-Oh deck?

Question

Ok, here it goes tell me what you think of it, it is tourement legal make any suggestions you have.

Blue-Eyes White Dragon 3

Dark Horus 1

Super Conductor Tyranno 1

The Creator 1

Flute of Summoning Dragon 2

Lord of D 3

Mausoleum of the Emperor 2

Terraforming 1

Decoy Dragon 1

Spear Cretin 1

Monster Reborn 1

The Shallow Grave 1

Swing of Memories 3

Brain Control 1

Draining sheild 1

Magic cylinder 1

Man Eater Bug 3

Sakuretsu Arumor 3

Torrential Tribute 1

Mystical Space Typhoon 3

Heavy Storm 1

Pot of Greed 1

Mirror force 1

Trap hole 3

Thats it 40 cards total. The deck is made to stall, and bring out strong monsters without needing to tribute. make any suggestions and tell me how it would do in a tournement! thanks

Answer 1

not a bad deck, but try to replace dark horus with something better as it seems to be sorta useless in this deck. A suggestion is tyrant dragon. You may also want to trade the trap holes for the bottomless variation and you may add reasonings or monster gates as they can let you summon high levels easier, and foolish burial is recommended.

Answer 2

very good

Answer 3

it sucks want a drag deck i will post

this deck contains the 3 most powerful dragons in this game

the 3 horus monsters

monsters : 21

3 horus lv 4

3 horus lv 6

2 horus lv 8

2 jinzo

2 cyber dragon

3 gravekepper spy

2 legendarry jujitsu master

2 dekoichi

1 marshmallon

1 spirit reaper

spells : 15

2 book of moon

2 shrink

2 emeny controller

1 heavy

1 m s t

1 giant truande

1 brain control

1 lightning vortex

1 monster reborn

1 premature burial

1 pot of avarice

1 smashing ground

traps : 5

2 bottomless trap hole

1 mirror force

1 torrential tribute

1 trap dustshoot

Answer 4

it looks very good. you are only allowed one M.S.T as well why not put in a dragons mirror and five headed dragon and blue eyes ultimate.put some dust tornados for the taken out mst's.

any chance you would trade your mirror force though??

Answer 5

It needs to be more focused here are two examples:

A Blue Eyes deck:

3 Blue Eyes White Dragon

1 Demise, King of Armageddon

2 Prime Material Dragon

1 Jinzo

3 Luster Dragon

2 Spear Dragon

2 Paladin of White Dragon

2 Manju of the 10,000 Hands

2 Kaibaman

1 Sangan

1 Morphing Jar

1 Heavy Storm

1 Giant Trunade

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Fissure

1 Smashing Ground

1 Nobleman of Crossout

2 Shrink

1 Enemy Controller

2 Ancient Rules

1 Advanced Ritual Art

2 White Dragon Ritual

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Royal Decree

A Creator-themed deck:

1 Dark Magician of Chaos

2 The Creator

2 Divine Phoenix of Nephthys

1 Ultimate Tryranno

1 Jinzo

2 Destiny Hero- Dasher

2 Cyber Dragon

2 The Creator Incarnate

1 Elemental Hero Stratos

1 Destiny Hero Disk Commander

2 Destiny Hero Fear Monger

1 Sangan

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Heavy Storm

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

2 Foolish Burial

3 Trade-In

2 Monster Gate

2 Reasoning

2 Lightning Vortex

1 Nobleman of Crossout

1 Mirror Force

1 Torrential Tribute

2 Royal Decree