Rate my Yu-gioh deck please?

Question

First deck that ive made that stays with topic(darkmagician)

Dark Eraticator Warloc-holo

Three Dark Magician - two are holo

Dark Magician girl-Holo

Black Luster Soldier Envoy Of The Beginning-Holo

Chaos command magician-Holo

Breaker the magical Warrior-Holo

Skilled Dark Magician x2

Blast magician

Maha Vailo

Ebon Magician Curran

Apprentice Magician

Magician Of Faith x2

Gemini elf

Rapid Fire Magician

Mythical Beast Cerberus

Traps:

Nightmare Wheel-Holo

Magic Cylinder-Holo

Negate Attack-Holo

Seven tools Of The bandit

Draining Shield

Devine Wrath

Spell Shield Type 8

Sakuretsu Armor

Trap Hole

pitch Black Power Stone

spells:

Dark magic Attack-Holo

sage's Stone-Holo

Raigeki-Holo

United We stand-Holo

Mage Power

Pot Of Greed

Magical Dimension x2

Mystic Box

Different Dimension Capsule

Lightning Vortex

Malevolent nuzzler

Spell absorbtion

Reload

Swords Of Revealing light

Mystical Space typhoon

Premature Burial

Change Of Heart

Magical Blast

wave Motion Cannon

Monster Reborn

Diffusion Wave motio

Answer 1

not 2 bad but aaaaaargh take out the banned cards pot of greed breaker black luster soldier envoy of the beggin take em out!!!!! and ditch the maha vailo but otherwise not too bad

Answer 2

Not bad but you have to many spells and not enough monsters to sacrifice. Try getting rid of one of your Dark Magicians, and mabey a Mirror Force.

Answer 3

try to cut down to 40 cards

only use some of those high levels,

use dark eradiacor person

3 dark magicians and the dark magician girl,

really evaluate what cards work best around dark magician and use them

try and get another skilled dark magician,

also its a high cost half your life points but dark magic curtain is useful

Answer 4

ok cut it down 2 40

take out Seven tools Of The bandit put royal decre

Answer 5

they're awsome man they're great sooo good