Rate my awful poem please?

Question

Hey Sarah

The nights on our side

We can walk on the air

And sit in the sky

Listen to my voice

Guiding you through the stars

Its your own choice

But you are going too far

The city lights glow

Underneath our paths

Across the world to go

If this would only last

Our last night together

You are walking where i wont go

So much for "forever"

I only wish I'd said no

I wish we would have stopped

And looked from the view

I only wish i could watch

One more sunset with you

again i know its cliche major and probably really boring but.... yeah

Answer 1

I've heard worse....it's not too bad actually...I would give it a 4 out of 5 for a yahoo poem!  

Answer 2

I kinda like it. I think your talented in a unique way. But i really like poems that ryhmes.  

Answer 3

this poem i rate, 3.2134567882131/10 i am sorry that i cant be more precise....

Answer 4

I really like the last stanza. Cute poem!

Answer 5

That is not awful. I am a published poet. Poetry is so personal. You need to keep writing and improve upon you work. Keep your head up. Poetry is hard, but you do have the gift. Submit that in a contest or something you never know you might win. If you don't keep on writing and expressing yourself. Make your voice heard. Goodluck and nice job.

Answer 6

You pretty much rated it yourself accurately.  

Answer 7

sounded like a song, but anyway from a critic's point of view it did sound cliche---but why listen to me if sarah loves it.

Answer 8

awe i liked that is was soo cute you get a 10!  

Answer 9

Why rate it when you already have? You gave it the descriptive word 'awful'

Answer 10

Great! 5 stars, I think you should write more poems!

Answer 11

that's really good. don't bash your own writing it only lowers your confidence. trust me i would know.