Rate my deck 1-10 tell me if i should add any cards?

Question

Trap cards:

Magicical Arm Shelid

Magic Cylinder

Shadow Spell

Mirco ray

Success Probability 0%

Spell Sheild Type-8

Sakuretsu Armor X2

Negate attack

Ultimate offering

The paths of destiny

Spell cards:

Heavy Storm X2

Pot of avrice

Mystic box

Stop defense

Mage power

Mystical Space Power X2

Dark Hole

Ookazi

Monster Reborn

Change of heart

The flute of summoning horn

Megamorph

Enemy controller

Ancient gear tank

Nightmares steelcage

Magical mallet

Weak monsters:'

Celtic guardian

Mystical elf

Dream clown

Rapid fire magician

Y dragon head

Gear golem The moving fortress

Wall of illusion

Magician of faith

Z metal tank

Birdface

Ancient gear engineer

Luster dragon

Spirit of flames

Strong monsters:

Mechanical Hound

Levia Dragon Daedalus

choas command magician

Launcher spider

Ocean Dragon lord Neo deadulus

Choas sorcerer

summononed skull

dark magician

Answer 1

try to theme out your deck, like go with things that go together better. keep as close to 40 as possible, you have a goo amount of weak monsters to sacrifice which is good

Answer 2

Sorry dude but right now your deck is only at a 6/10

First of all you have way to much banned cards in your deck. Such as Megamorph, Magician of faith, Chaos sorcerer, Dark Hole etc...

Also, even if you were to play banned add the premature burial, envoy of the end, harpie feather duster etc...

Basically right now you have a base deck, so you have the base and you just need to work on getting better cards, I mean celtic guardian??? Ookazi???  Also you need to add cards such as solemn judgment, mirror force lightning vortex etc...

Last suggestion would be to make your deck based on a specific type of cards such as spellcasters, warriors, dark type etc... For that way it is easier for you to make a deck and to focus on getting the right cards. Also try to limit your cards.

Good Luck!!!