Rate my deck: Yu-Gi-Oh!?

Question

This deck follows most of the restricted guidelines, however if a card is forbidden I only put 1 of it in. I was hoping I could get an opinion other than my own.

Deck Total: 45 cards

Monsters: 23

1 Ancient Gear Golem

1 Ancient Gear Beast

1 Jinzo

1 Dark Ruler Ha Des

3 Slate Warrior

2 Skilled Dark Magician

1 Breaker the Magical Warrior

1 Mystic Swordsman Lv 4

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Mirage Dragon

1 Pitch-Black Warwolf

1 Tsukuyomi

1 Inaba White Rabbit

1 Witch of the Black Forest

2 Man-Eater Bug

2 Penguin Soldier

1 Cyber Jar

1 Dummy Golem

Spells: 10

1 Raigeki

1 Lightning Vortex

1 Dark Hole

1 Harpies Feather Duster

2 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Swords of Revealing Light

1 Change of Heart

1 Monster Reborn

1 Monster Reincarnation

Traps: 12

1 Mirror Force

1 Magic Cylinder

2 Negate Attack

2 Draining Shield

2 Sakuretsu Armor

1 Ordeal of a Traveler

1 Raigeki Break

1 Magic Drain

1 Trap Jammer

Also while I'm writing this...can you activate the card Ordeal of a Traveler at any time? It says you can only activate its EFFECT when your opponent declares an attack. Still a little cloudy on that so if anyone could clear that up that would be great

THANKS

Answer 1

cool

Answer 2

the format your are running by is known as the triditional format and that all cards that are baned in the advanced format is limeted in the triditional format. to make it fare only the advanced foramt can be used in authorized tournaments. the only thing that doed not fit the triditional format is the 2 mystical space typhoon and you are only alowed to have 1. even if in the triditional format. most people keep their decks in advanced format just ofr the fun of it because more people would play against them even if they dont join authouized tournaments. anyway like most of everyone eles said ordeal of a traveler can be activated any time so the best time to use it is in chain to another card so and at the end of it, you can use chain strike to burn them for lots of damage. from what i see the deck is based around attacking with lots of attack points in a short period of time and that is why you have the skill dark magician and such. to make this deck more successful i am going to change the spells and traps so it would look like this (it will be leagle in sepe 1 once the new format is in place)

spells: 18

1 Raigeki

3 Lightning Vortex

1 Dark Hole

1 Harpies Feather Duster

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Swords of Revealing Light

1 Change of Heart

1 Monster Reborn

1 scapegoat

1 pot of greed

1 graceful charity

1 premature burial

1 brain control

1 fissure

1 smashing ground

1 reasoning

traps 6

1 mirror force

1 torental tribute

1 magic cylinder

3 royal decree

there you will be much more protected against traps like sackrestu armor and stuff and at the same time it barely affects you so it is good like jinzo. the monster looks like it needs some work but it is hard to make changes without you having to spend a couple hundred dolers so i'll leave it at that

Answer 3

dang i remember yugioh was the hit when i was in elementary~!

Answer 4

First of all your deck is okay like a 7/10 simply because you just have pretty good cards. You do have some forbidden ones if you care about that stuff. If you themed your deck a little, it also could improve in that way. You can flip Ordeal of a Traveler anytime, and after that you get to activate the effect every time your opponent attacks and only then.

Answer 5

4/5

Answer 6

this deck is good but i suggest you take out the 2 skilled dark magicians just for the simple fact that you dont have a dark magician..if you have two cyber dragons exchange them for the two skilled dark magicians.cyber jar is a banned card so you should take that out along with witch of the black forest and raigeki,harpies faether duster,and change of heart...add a mystic swordsman lv2 in to get out mystic swordman lv4..and ordeal of a traveler can only work when your opponent declares an attack..other than tht your deck is an 9/10...great work..if you need any other deck ideas just email me

Answer 7

its ok.

you have too many BANNED cards and too many cards. try limit down to 40-43.