Rate my deck and make it better?

Question

Tributes(6):

Dark Magician

Dark Magician

Dark Magician

Dark Eradicator Warlock

Cybernetic Magician

Jinzo

NoN-Tributes(14):

Destiny Hero-Diamond Dude

Destiny Hero-Diamond Dude

Chiron The Mage

Chiron The Mage

Skilled Dark Magician

Skilled Dark Magician

Neo-Spacian Grand Mole

Neo-Spacian Aqua Dolphin

Kycoo The Ghost Destroyer

Marshmallon

Spirit Reaper

Night Assailant

Vortex Trooper

D.D Assailant

Spells(24):

Dark Magic Curtain

Dark Magic Curtain

Dark Magic Curtain

Tribute To The Doomed

Tribute To The Doomed

Tribute To The Doomed

Nobleman Of Extermination

Nobleman Of Extermination

Smashing Ground

Smashing Ground

Dark Magic Attack

Fissure

Lightning Vortex

Premature Burial

Lighten The Load

Monster Reborn

Magical Mallet

Heavy Storm

Shield Crush

Spell Reproduction

Swords Of Reavealing Light

MST

Nobleman Of Crossout

Dark World Lightning

Answer 1

( 7.9 out of 10 )

It's a good deck but it could be better. Don't get me wrong bro but having no traps leaves you a little open, and if your opponent stops the effect's of your spells than you would be wiped out. But that's why I think this deck could use a little tweaking, but not a big one. I can see a lot of exellent stradegies, and it would be hard to stop that deck. It still good but try it a bit like this if you want bro, it's not much different but whatever. Either way you build it, it won't be easy to beat bro.

MONSTERS: 22

x1 Dark Magician Girl

x1 Cybernetic Magician

x1 Jinzo

x1 Dark Eradicator Warlock

x1 Dark Magician Knight

x3 Dark Magician

x3 Skilled Dark Magician

x2 Double Coston

x2 Destiny Hero Diamond Dude

x1 Marshmallon

x1 Spirit Reaper

x1 Neo-Spacian Aqua Dolphin

x1 Neo-Spacian Grand Mole

x1 Neo-Spacian Flare Scarab

x1 Chiron the Mage

x1 Night Assailant

SPELLS: 21

x3 Dark Magic Curtain

x2 Knight's Title

x1 Sage's Stone

x1 Dark Magic Attack

x2 Tribute to the Doomed

x2 Smashing Ground

x2 Magical Mallet

x1 Monster Reborn

x1 Premature Burial

x1 Pot of Avarice

x1 Lightning Vortex

x1 Swords of Revealing Light

x1 Spell Absorbtion

x1 Nobleman of Crosssout

x1 Brain Control

TRAPS: 2

x1 Royal Decree

x1 Magician's Circle

Answer 2

maybe a blue eyes white dragon and a black luster solider

Answer 3

goood job, but get a mobius