Rate my deck im making changes soon?

Question

monsters-22

chthonian emporor dragon

marshmallon

amazonness swords woman

yata-garasu

witch of the black forest

sangan

magician of faith

cyber jar

kycoo the ghost destroyer

sinister serpent

mask of darkness

morphing jar #2

necro gardna

brain jacker

spirit reaper

neo-spacian grand mole

d.d. warrior lady

tribe infecting virus

lava golem

blade knight

theban nightmare

asura preist

spells-13

hammer shot

swords of revealing light

pot of greed

raigeki

graceful charity

scapegoat

snatch steal

harpies feather duster

united we stand

card destruction

monster reborn

change of heart

the forceful sentry

traps-15

ring of destruction

karma cut x2

forced back

call of the haunted

dimensional prison

bottomless trap hole

torrential tribute

divine wrath

seven tools of the bandit

ojama trio

mirror force

secret barrel

imperial order

magic cylinder

i follow traditional format so tell me what to take out and what to put in and keep it cheap

Answer 1

2/10 u have rare cards like mirror force and marsh try to bu the new struture deck and add those if u have no money

Answer 2

Awesome! 9/10

Answer 3

Seriously dude...I don't know what to say. I mean it seems like your trying to make a Banned beatdown deck. Its crappy. Half of the cards are banned. I can't even suggest any cards becaus you do not have a theme. Beatdown may be a theme but it never works.Rating: 1 out of 5

Banned Cards

Yata Garasu

Witch of the B. Forest

Magician of Faith

Cyber Jar

Sinister Serpent

Tribe Infecting Virus

Pot of Greed

Graceful Charity

Raigeki

Harpies Feather Duster

Snatch Steal

Change of Heart

Imperial Order

Call of the Haunted

Answer 4

u got a shitload of banned cards dude.                                                                                                no theme either.

Answer 5

- everything run this

22 Monstters

1 L a D D

1 Chaos Emp

1 Envoy Beging

1 D M o C

2 Cyber Drgaon

3 Cyber Vally

2 Mystic Tomatto

2 Shinnign Angel

1 DD Warrior Lady

1 Snipe Hunter

1 Shadow Priest Of Ohamn

1 Marshmallon

1 Spirit Reaper

1 Breaker

1 M o F

1 Witch Of Black Forest

1 Sangan

13 Spells

2 Machine Duplication

2 Allure Of Darkness

1 Raigeki

1 Harpies Feather Duster

1 Monster Reborn

1 Premature Burial

1 Change Of Heart

1 Pot Of Greed

1 Cracefull Charity

1 Dimension Fusion

1 D.D.R. - Diffrent Dimension Recarnation

7 Traps

3 Solemn Judgment

1 Crush Card Virus

1 Mirror Force

1 Imperial Order

1 Call Of The Haunted

Answer 6

no  offence but this deck looks likes youve jst put ure hand into a bag of cards and pickd at random because uve got ojamo trio with no ojamo and a neo spacian with no elemental heros

         3.5/10 =/ good dueling ^.^