Rate my exoida deck?

Question

Rate my exodia forbidden one deck?

5 pieces of exoida,poison draw frog,d hero-defender,royal magical libary,emissary of the afterlife,chainsaw insect,dark mimic lv1,big eye,skelengel,witch of the black forest,sangan,cyber valleyx2,dark factory of mass production,painful choice,dimension fusion,pot of avarice,magical mallet,graceful charity,differnt dimension capsule,pot of greed,dark world lighting,monster reincartion,messenger of peace,level limit-area b,spell economics,mirage of nightmare,card of safe return,backup solider,trap hole,threatening roar,gravity bind,appropriatex2,reckless greedx2

Answer 1

what I would do is put in monsters that can be searched from the deck and summoned via. giant rat, troop dragon, hyena, shining angel, nimble momonga, and masked dragon.

it keeps your field with defense and it takes cards out of your deck easily letting you draw the exodia pieces alot quicker.

Answer 2

If your gonna run appropriate add some dark world dealings, dark bribes, and hand destruction.

Answer 3

-2 appropriate

-1 dimension fusion

-1 card of safe return

-1 trap hole

-1 threatening roar

-1 dark world lightning

+1 toll

+1 swords of reavealing light

+1 bottomless trap hole

+1 D.D. warrior lady

+1 D.D. assailant

+1 D.D. warrior

+1 infinite cards

+1 muka muka

+1 hand destruction

and any other cards you might think will fit in.

Answer 4

I knwo you said you don't paly forbidden cards but you are (witch of the black forest, painful choice, pot of greed, graceful charity, mirage of nightmare, etc.)

here is the version that I used that wins pretty fast

Monsters

Exodia x5

Toon Cannon Soldier

Sangan

Destiny Hero - Fear Monger x2

Destiny Hero - Disk Commander x1

Thunder Dragon x3

Treeborn Frog x1

Spells

Magical Mallet x3

Pot of Avarice x2

Toon Table of Contents x3

Dark World Dealings x2

Premature Burial x1

Upstart Goblin x3

Hand Destruction x2

Reinforcements of the Army x2

Destiny Draw x2

Traps

Legacy of Yata-Garasu x2

Jar of Greed x1

Rush Recklessly x3

just my personal opinion of course