Rate my new Deck don't worried to levve bad commerts ?

Question

Monsters x20

GIant Orc x1

Herald of Craetion x1

GILFORD The LIGHTING x1

Shining Abyss x1

The Creator x1

Guarian Angel Joan x1

CHIRON The Mage x1

TYRANT DRAGON x1

The Wicked Eraser x1

Raging flame Sprite x1

GYROID x1

SUBMARINEROID x1

EXILED FOURCE x1

HOMUCULUS THE Alchemic BEing x1

MATAZA THE ZAPPER x1

LITTLE-WINGUARD x1

CYBER- TECH ALLIGATOR x1

MAGNA-SLASH DRAGON x1

ELEMENTAL Hero WILDHEART x1

KAISER Sea HOURSE x1

Spells x11

SMASING GROUND x1

BIG BANG SHOT x1

THE SHALLOW GRAVE X1

BANNER OF COURGE X1

LIGHTING VORTEX X1

RUSH RECKLESSLY X1

BRAIN CONTROL X1

SOUL EXCHANGE X1

MAUSOLUM OF THE EMPEROR X1

GUARD PENALTY X1

MEGAMORPH X1

EKIBYO DRAKMORD X1

TRAPS X9

MAGIC JAMMER X1

DUST TORNADO X1

MAGIC CYLINDER X2

SHADOW SPELL X1

NEGATE ATTACK X1

RISING ENERGY X1

COMPULSORY EVATION DEVICE X1

FUN-RIN-KA-ZAN X1

Answer 1

umm honestly that really needs alot of work

Answer 2

your cards, hmmm i find it so focused on offense i recommend you use cards that uses the opponent's card power to beat himself up... defensive magic and trap is good to your mentioned monsters...

and i think you mind removing the lightning vortex if you will add my recommended magic and trap card

recommended:

mirror force

just desserts

*the card with somewhat like a controller on the monster's neck I forgot name *

ground collapse <you may add the ojama trio and the ojama king for ultimate no monster on field combo>

a castle trap card that negates effect of other trap cards

forgot the others

rating ur deck umm 8.5/10 ^^

Answer 3

You can compete now but i recommend you to add more trap cards and remove the GYROID because of its effect

Answer 4

good for a tournament . 9/10

Answer 5

If this Deck is non competitive then I think its ok

Answer 6

thats a good deck i give it a 10/10 cuz your gyroid allows two mosters to att then it get destroyed. youll almost make it to the finals if in tournament

Answer 7

These cards are good.10/10

Answer 8

i think you will have a hard time in a tournament. you should change up your monsters (gilford the lightning). overall 7/10. u should go by some type of theme. your deck is all over the place. 7/10 just dropped to 6/10.

Answer 9

2/10 I'm sorry but very poor. There is no theme what-so-ever.

I think you shoudl try a beatdown deck. Something like what muggy8 or watever his name was, said.

Answer 10

yawn needs renewvation

Answer 11

looks like u just bought a rise of the dragon lord deck and made a few changes... not too good. what u want it to have cards that summon fast and are strong (that is the team of that deck) sot that way you will be able to storm the field fast with powerful monsters... just be aware that u can only have 1 magic cylinder. also have treeborn frog to use a a prime tribute material and also have things like foolish burial to bring it to the grave. also have peten the dark clown to have a better chance of making your deck work. in a deck like this i would suggest you make a deck that look like this instead of what u already have. i try not to list cards that are not too expensive but is that is sometimes hare...

3 summoned skull

2 frostosaurous

3 peten the dark clown

3 giant germ

3 apprentice magician

2 old vindictive magician (or crystal seer if possible)

2 des feral imp

3 mobius the frost monarch

2 pot of avarice

2 hand destruction

1 heavy storm

1 scape goat

3 nobelman of extermination

1 mystical space typhoon

1 brain control

1 swords of revealing light

1 monster reborn

1 premature burial

1 scape goat

2 royal decree

1 torrential tribute

1 mind crush

u can easily replace them wit monarchs at will and that all depends on u... since it does cost more i you are going for a side deck teh number one card to go for is skill drain!!! since the tribute material activate in teh graveyard, you can work tehm without any worries... no treeborns because there are 2 royal decrees