Rate my new and improved crystal beast deck?

Question

monsters: 20

3 cb pegasus

3 cb tiger

3 cb tortoise

2 cb carbuncle

2 cb cat

1 cb eagle

1 dweller in the depths

2 magna slash dragon

2 gravi crush dragon

1 rainbow dragon

spells: 15

2 crystal abundance

3 crystal promise

2 crystal blessing

2 crystal beacon

2 crystal release

1 rare value

1 crystal tree

1 monster reborn

traps: 8

1 crystal pair

1 crystal counter

1 rainbow path

1 rainbow gravity

1 magic cylinder

1 draining shield

2 sakuretsu armor

Answer 1

add a SORL i feel every deck need that

Answer 2

ummmmm.....you dont have any amber mammoths? u cant run rainbow dragon without him!!!! nad if you forgot to put him on the list, then its alright, although you need another cobalt eagle cuz a great combo is use eagles ability to put sapphire pegasus on top at the end of every turn to get out more beasts. also, take out monster reborn and add a mage power!!  7.5/10

Answer 3

put mage power take out monster reborn add rainbow dragon and cyrstal seer 7 out of 10

Answer 4

Ok man u need to get rid off of a lot of cards, but i better show you my CB deck ( actually my idea of one since i dont play Yu-gi-oh in RL )

Monsters 18:

x2 CB ruby carbuncle

x3 CB amethist cat

x3 CB Sapphire pegasus

x3 CB Mammoth amber

x3 CB topaz tiger

x2 Rescue cat

     Morphing Jar

     Marshmallon

Spells 22:

x3 Crystal abbundance

x3 Crystal Beacon

x2 Crystal blessing

x2 Crystal promise

x2 Crystal Tree

x2 Crystal Release

x2 Rare Value

x3 Ancient City - Rainbow Ruins

x2 lightning vortex ( or 1 LV n 1 smashing ground )

     MST

Traps 2 :

    Mirror Force

    Torrential tribute

Well  i run this deck in the ywc2008 ( the nds game) but i cant use the rescue cats so i use 2 emerald tortoise, but man this deck is pretty awesome it can become in a OTK with the crystal abbundance and isnt so hard to run

Hope i helped =)