It's only the first verse to a whole rap that i wrote. It' s a bit introductory, I want good critisicm to help me improve this verse. I don;t want haters telling me S**t.
Thanx in advance:
Driver please bring the R8 around
Wanna roll through the streets and see the haters frown
Gotta mark my territory in this biz
Gotta do it again and again to show who it is
It's the L2B steppin' on the scene, I am mean
But for some reason I like to keep it clean
And not obscene, you know what I mean?
Just make a great big scene and leave in between
What goes up must come down
That goes for your fame too, Oh down frown
You tried your best, now who’s next
It’s me in a vest
Coming like a bullet, hit your chest
Stole your press too
I hit the club scene right
Did it with all might, now I’m tight
As the only Gangsta teen seeking perfection
In this Rap game. I'll only live twice
Entrepreneur by day and rapper by night
That's how I live my one heck of a life
Don’t tick me off when I’m runnin the show
Cause when I’m feelin real Gangsta, my emotions flow
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