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Rate my poem...? (10 points) ?

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Well i wrote this quick little poem and i want you guys to rate it from a 1-10 and give me some feedback. I just wrote it, it doesn't reflect me. So tell me what you think

Who Am I?

Who am I

I can not answer that

What am I here for

to be someone in this life

or to be no one

I recall my childhood

When i was a joyful, precious little girl

but now I am an angry, envious girl

I look in the mirror

and i see confusion

A shy, insecure girl

wondering whether to live or not

Asking herself

who cares if she is not alive

So I ask myself

Who am I

I do not know

Best answer gets 10 points!

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  1. 8.

    Cliche, but written in an interesting way.

    Could use stanza structure and metering.  

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