Rate my poem about Of Mice and Men..?

Question

I hope this time will be different

But knowing Lennie, I reckon it won’t.

We’ve been to every dang ranch around these parts

And we keep havin’ to leave cause Lennie ruins it.

But not this time, he can’t.

We’re going to this new ranch

Were there is a new boss and new folks

They know nothing about us

And we can start all over again

Just like the last twenty times

But see, I’m always worryin’ if Lennie will behave or not,

Always checkin’ on him and can never do nothin’ on my own.

He’s a big, strong, hard-workin’ son-of-a-gun

But he can’t even take care of himself.

It’s a dang shame.

And he has this thing for soft feeling textures

He accidentally kills little animals cause he be pettin’ them too hard.

And that’s why we had to run from Weed

That fool couldn’t keep his hands off that woman’s dress.

So now we’re workin’ here at this new ranch.

Answer 1

sounds like you took it from the book and put it into Gorges piont of view

Answer 2

At 1st congratulation to you bec you wrote poem :)

Answer 3

I dont think i would call that a poem i would call it a story retold

should something rhyme or make one think about the meaning of life or something? oh what do i know anyway

Answer 4

Its good.. i like that