Rate my poem about racism ?

Question

I'm 13(goin on 30 LoL) its about racism its short cuz i teared up when i wrote it

(>'_')> RACISM <('_'<)

Racism is bad

Racism makes the ignorent glad

Racism is sad

Racim makes me mad

if there was no more racism that would b rad

-Stefanie age 13

Answer 1

good :] touching.

Answer 2

i hate racism!!! hate it sooo bad.

i love your poem

Answer 3

if you were 8 or nine I would say &quot;oh good you spelled everything right.&quot; If you spelled everything right. (or used SPELL CHECK.)

Answer 4

i like it cause your telling the complete truth

continue doing what you do it is veary touching  

Answer 5

lol. I would take out the rad part.

Answer 6

Racism

Yes it is bad

and makes ignorant people glad

sorry it makes you sad

but please dont get mad

cuz your poem is so frekin rad =]

the awesomness man, the awesomeness !!!!

loved it simple yet powerful

hope this helps =]  

Answer 7

um did you write this in like 1 second?

racism is a strong subject.. and a poem about something like that needs to be heartfelt and welll thought out.

Answer 8

every line doesnt have to rhyme that much :]

and its pretty basic

but other than that i guess its pretty good