Rate my poem? easy points!?

Question

And before the blackbird ends its flight

Previously assumed, the suns and sky

Open fire upon the roses bloomed

Can indeed the redbird sing while blazing

Arrows soar? The trees and tresses

Lark around, confirmed forevermore.

Yet as the new night falls flat on face,

Perhaps the birds were wrong,

So pieces pick up the scattered song, and

Envelope what was apocalypse.

interpretation, comments, suggestions?

also wondering if you notice anything extra special about it, hardly anyone ever catches this in my poetry :)

Answer 1

wow..........nice poem, very well constructed

Answer 2

nice work!!!

Answer 3

Sounds like people were high and died.

Answer 4

Yes I noticed it right away APOCALYPSE  the word the beginning letter of ever phase ends up being the word!

Loved Your poem nicely written! Yes I really did like the way you did that clever aren't you! PS. really dont think you need the word and--it is after scattered song,

Answer 5

good job

Answer 6

Thats awesome!!! And  the first letter of every sentence is

APOCALYPSE!!!!!! Coolness!!!!