Rate my poem from 0 to 10 (and feel free to critcize)?

Question

Be something

Be something good like a brick wall that can't be moved unless a stronger force comes and knocks it down

BY CARL WALKER

Don't be water, water has no hold

You can't freeze a brick wall and give it another name

Don't be water

Answer 1

4

Answer 2

whoa that makes me wanna be a wrecking ball NOt

10

Answer 3

6- Decent  I'm just another brick in the wall myself.

Answer 4

intresting

Answer 5

huh im confused

Answer 6

a 5 that is very strong but a poem has to be longer... i would make a great quote though

Answer 7

The metaphor of a brick wall is too cliche... think of a more unique metaphor.

Answer 8

Interesting but you can improve better.I will give you 7 out of 10.

Answer 9

??

sorry but i just dont get it?

Answer 10

2/10

I didn't feel anything