Rate my poem please, one to ten?

Question

Calm seas, cool breeze

Ships float by at night

Alarm sounds "Taking rounds"

All prepare to fight

Quarters called, mast is falled

Ship begins to roll

Frightened screams, cracking beams

To Davey Jones, my soul

In the drink, watch her sink

Friends are still within

Freezing blue, drowning crew

Then comes the dorsal fin

Blue to red, bobbing head

Flying lions feast

Cold glass eye, scream then die

Victims of the beast

Makes them bob, your heart to throb

Pulls you underneath

Can't be real 'till you feel

Cold steel razor teeth

Answer 1

9. You've captured the feeling of the situation very well in the rhythm. You should find somewhere to read it out loud; it would sound awesome.

Answer 2

Wow, that's great!

Answer 3

9. It's very good. I love it.

Answer 4

pff 10, id rate it like 20 that wuz awesome!!

Answer 5

10+ very creative

Answer 6

Sharks right? 5