Rate my poem please? I want opinions?

Question

"Unknown"

I walk through the hole called my life confused,

Every passing second opens a new mystery;

I think of the days when things went well,

Unlikely to happen again in my book, my ancient history.

Trying to find the meaning of my life

Is like falling through glass with nobody to catch me;

You say I'll find out, but you know I won't,

Just you wait and see.

The visions of the future are foggy in my mind,

I try to pick myself up and heal the scars;

But that's impossible to do,

I just keep wishin' on stars.

So I'm walking here on this road called my life,

I'm keeping steady, all alone;

Trying to find out the answers to the mysteries,

Wandering here all alone~

I know it's not the best.

But please give me your opinions.

Answer 1

It's kind of sappy.  

Answer 2

Not bad, I've also seen worse, but i've also seen better.

I  agree that the beginning is best.

Just maybe mess with it a bit? Try out something different =)

Answer 3

i feel like it has potential...ur right its not the best but i've honestly seen ALOT worse. the first 4 lines are the best. it gets a little weak around the wishing on stars part. It just needs a little be of work if u want my honest opinon. not horrible at all.