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Rate my poem?................?

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the cold air brushes our cheeks

treading this street so oblique

alleyways, back doors so askew

you, thinking i was made for you

a dark, weary, twisting road

our minds share a different mode

amicable songs of your soul

but mine taking a seperate role

surface value has you entranced

at your pity ive barely glanced

you pathetic louse in human skin

carnal desires walk with sin

transported to that solemn place

gloam and darkness, shadow embrace

distorted hallways, concrete dreams

my mind regrets, your mind sleeps.

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  1. That's very deep. I like it.

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