Rate my poems out of 10?

Question

These links will take you to the poems

http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Summer-Thoughts.220879

http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Limerick/Dog.219309

http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Liaisons-of-the-Heart.218339

http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Relationship-Acrostic.217629

http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Love.216049

http://www.authspot.com/Poetry/Flower-Poem.215991

Answer 1

Here:

http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

Overall, 5.5/10

Answer 2

'Summer' didn't flow as much as I'd like. I would change the title. (I didn't recognize a thought, only observations) 7

'Dog' I liked it except the second line didn't sound right. I think it's a little too long in comparison with the others. 8.5

'Heart' this is good, but it seemed a little more paragraph-y than others, i take it you are trying out many different styles..7

'Relationship' two problems; 'In Shortage' sounds odd and you contradicted yourself in the last two lines. 7

'Love' cute! but ive never heard the expression 'Confusion chasing'8.5

'Flower' I don't care for the last line, the outline of the poem seems jumbled, but with rhymes that's typical and the first line isn't right rhythmically with the second 7.5

Sorry if you think I'm being critical, but I know if I were writing something (and that wouldn't be pretty) then I would want a person to tear up what I have that's not excellent so I could try to make it better.

Good luck with your writing!