Rate my rap 1-10 please on a scale?

Question

the world that surrounds me all about money

it makes everything around me look quite ugly

well money dont mean nothing from what i've learnt

just leave you surffering twisted and turned

see some people have greed for green

cant even do a good deed like fixing new orleans

they just use it for the things they wished for

they got good things that's why they get the wh0res

there's Benny Hin living in a golden palace

but he is the sin all he wants to be is a gallant

and there's Lil Wayne who making the millis

he got no game for him to make money is silly

see i was raised in a house where you stand in pride

too always use the values and release the man inside

before you change for money think twice

do not play the game dont roll the dice

because it will land on change for the money

be a man dont make your life ugly

Answer 1

badass, thats all i gotta say

Answer 2

i wouldnt buy your album

Answer 3

I would give it a 7 for the rhyming maybe change up the last line so it ends in a rhym also

Answer 4

it's pretty good, but there are a lot of songs/rap that are exactly like this. i know it's hard to be creative, but once people hear it, they'll be like "omg.. it's this again.."

just try to be more original

Answer 5

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