Rate my rap from 1-10?

Question

Sittin' here thinking about the murder of Emmett Till/Thinking what a stupid reason to kill/I wonder how Caroline Bryant feels/can't forget about J.W. Milam and Roy Bryant/got me thinking how can people be so violent/can't believe the m o t h e r f*****k e r s got acquitted/for the crime they commited/later on they even admitted/its like the crime was premitted/so god tell me why/Emmetts mother had to say goodbye/its really bugging me like a fruit fly/what I don't understand is how do you murder a 14 year old boy and throw him in the river/a dead body is what his mom is delivered

Answer 1

0.

YOU FUKCING SUCK.

Answer 2

Talking about a serious subject doesn't mask poor writing abilities.

Back to the drawing board!

Answer 3

It's good and it talks about a serious topic, which most rap doesn't these days.

I would say it's good so far, but try to make it longer if you want it to be a song.  I'd rate it a 7, but I can't tell how good the rest of the song would be or not.

Answer 4

you need a beat.

Answer 5

good message no bars and the rythmes are too choppy hey check mine out http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?...

Answer 6

This is really good!!

You should keep it up, your writing skills are awesome! :D