Another user posted a poem that he wanted rated, and I decided to try my hand at rewriting it.
Original work: http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=At2MjirXhwvb3zvcW_FMd0nsy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20080811195056AApFT9L&show=7#profile-info-r35Ndgenaa
Rewrite:
As thoughts of you cross my mind
I feel overjoyed, carefree
LIke wild horses memories of you race
The clock slowely ticks
the calender pages flip
My mind wants to scream
Tell you how I feel
You are perfect,
you had it, everything,
everything, but for what I wanted you to have
Love, love for me
Like a child and his balloon
Only to have it float away into the noonday sun
Memories of you, memories of us
I hold onto, only to wonder,
Do you rember them too?
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