Rate my secret love poem!!?

Question

1=horrible and 10=wonderful

hmm. I think about you everyday

I wonder what you would say

If I said those three words,

would you make me your girl?

I think about you day and night

and the thought of you makes my feel alright

as if all my troubles went away

and you were here with me to stay.

Answer 1

few more romantic words will make it a point earner of 9

now you get 7

Answer 2

it just mesmerized me. very well done. 9/10

Answer 3

10 .... Did some1 write this to you

Answer 4

5 could be longer and have more of a story. But all in all good wording, keep it up!

Answer 5

Um 10 if you tried hard 1 if you made it up in like 2 minutes.

Answer mine

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Answer 6

next line of ur poem

ur lover is totally g*y

Answer 7

I have a deep love for art and literature

And poems often serve as a cure

I criticize other peoples creativity

I tend to be brutal with honesty

And it can push me away from society

It has become my flaw, my nature

Though, I can offer you much respect

I can't give you the highest number

For I would rate it less than perfect

But what do I know of your love?

Although, I can read what you said above

Your true feelings can't be described in words

And I belong to neither of your worlds

Your dedication is strong and tough

And your words are powerful enough

He will see the whole pattern through

I'm sure he will tell you what his heart says true

I can't give you a high number

I can't give you a low number

Because your passion truly deserves more

Than what you consider a perfect score