Rate my semi beat down deck for yugioh?

Question

MONSTERS:21

gladiator beast andalx2

,ancient gear golem

,luster dragon

, gyroid

,guardian angel joan

,slate warrior

,evil hero malicious edge

,drillroid

,cyber-tech alligetor

,man-eater bug

,elemental hero clayman

,penguin soldier

,alien shocktrooper

,giant soldier of stone,

majestic mech-goryu

obsidian dragon

exiled force

ocean dragon lord-neo-deadalus

gene-warped warwolf

black stego

marshmallon

TRAPS:11

dust tornadox2

spellbinding circle

xing zhen hu

trap hole

sakurestu armorx2

magic cylinder

draining shield

return soul

shadow spell

SPELLS:10

ekibyo drakmord

scapegoat

lightning vortex

swords of revealing light

nobleman of crossout

mystical space typhoon

premature burial

tribute to the doomed

monster reborn

axe of despair

Answer 1

lots of banned cards but noone really cares bout them unless ur in a tourny but other than that its good but i could kik its ***

Answer 2

crappy  ............                  just kidding

Answer 3

put lycanthrope and its ritual but otherwize 10/10

Answer 4

Should put more focus and effort into this.  It looks like you combined random monsters in five minutes to make this deck.  Try to group you cards around a certain theme as this can help a lot.

Answer 5

no offense dude but this deck is kinda sloppy... using equips like axe just doesnt cut it today especially competetively, the only staple equip is United We Stand, possibly Mage Power. If you say this deck is beat down then why all the high def monsters, gear golem/giant soldier of stone. Also as for your magic cards, discarding = bad, tribute to the doomed and lightning vortex should not be run in a deck unless discarding is a part of your strategy