Rate my warrior deck?? also suggestions to make it better. could it win a tournament or have potential?

Question

monsters-

2x don zaloog

2x freed the matchless general

2x exiled force

3x gearfried

gearfried swordmaster

2x marauding captain

2x goblin attack force

dd warrior lady

zombrya the dark

elemental hero bladedge

obnoxious celtic guardian

rocket warrior

mys. swordsman lv. 2 & 4

guardian sphinx

blade knight

command knight

mataza the zapper

swift gaia

ninja grandmaster sasuke

magic-

premature burial

2x reinforcement of army

2x warrior eturning alive

mystical space typhoon

lightning vortex

tribute to the doomed

realese restraint

brain control

heavy storm

swords of reaveling light

a forces

monster reincarnation

fissure

hammer shot

trap-

negate attck

call of the haunted

magic cylinder

2x compulsory evacuation device

sakuretsu armor

i have a 49 cards andi want to get to 44 or less. wat to take out??

Answer 1

It is awesome!!!! I think.

Answer 2

first of all. it can

t win a torny, it's not even legal.  call of the haunted is banned

2nd of all, no self-respection warrior maker will be caught dead with zobra, bladeedge etc in the deck.

here is suggested deck list(major change, so have to have a redo... I usually perfer to just tell u to swap cards but...)

tributes(or usually), 4:

2 freed the matchless

2 swift gaia

non-tributes, 16:

1 wildheart(yeah, a E-hero... but trap immune for god's sake)

2 mataza the zapper(primary damage dealer)

3 command knight

2 ninja grandmaster sasuke(primary beatstick)

1 DD warrior lady

2 DD assaisn(secondary beatstick, effect)

3 marading captain

2 exiled force

(note, if u don't have any of said, replace with cards on this list, as long as u keep under 3.  that means u can run 3 exiled, assaisn, ninja etc if need be.  those are all good cards)

magic, 17:

premature burial

reinforcement of army

monster reborn

lightning vortex

heavy storm

swords of reaveling light

3 a forces

2 mage power

1 united we stand

3 axe of despair

2 pot of avarice

(if you don't have any card, and u should have no excuse for any except united, because rest of card either have common or are 1 buck rares, sub in MST, another lightning, smashing ground in that order)

traps, 5:

1 mirror force

2 solemn judgement

1 magic cylinder

1 royal decree

(if u don't have any of those, sub in, in this order, 3 dimonsional prison, 3 sakurasu armor, 1 negate attack)

side board:

(destruction team, 6)

MST

2 dust tornado

1 hammer shot

1 fissure

1 lightning vortex

(counter/negate team, 7)

royal depression

imperial order

???(the one that negates special summons, can't recall the name)

2 magic jammer/spellshield type 8/cursed seal/magic drain(as long as it negates 1 magic card)

2 7 tools/trap jammer/additional solemn judgement/additional royal decree(as long as negate traps)

(anti-stall, 2)

although u have lvl 3 or lower to pass the first part, it is impartial that u can break down defence walls etc.  although u have above 2 teams to basically stop any combo forming, consider those:

1 shooting star bow

1 raging flame sprit(u'd be surpriesd what u can do with equips)

twink with the side board a bit, I think I covered basis with most tactic combos that are hard to beat(moarchs, exodia/burn/mill(stall), gladiator etc) but I'm not sure if I remeber the best cards for the jobs...

cards u might want to find, and might find useful that I don't know if will fit: snipe hunter, cyber dragon, freed the wander etc.

Answer 3

i say get rid of brain control, bladedge, release restraint, gearfried the swordsmaster, and swift gaia. that will drop you to your target area, but i also suggest you get either a gilford the lightning or belial marquis of darkness. although belial is a feind, he would still be a good addition to this deck.

Answer 4

As of now this deck would never win a tournament. so here are some pointers.

remove:

negate attck

call of the haunted

magic cylinder

2x compulsory evacuation device

sakuretsu armor

a forces

monster reincarnation

tribute to the doomed

realese restraint

hammer shot

zombrya the dark

elemental hero bladedge

obnoxious celtic guardian

rocket warrior

3x gearfried

gearfried swordmaster

guardian sphinx

blade knight

mataza the zapper

swift gaia

ninja grandmaster sasuke

mys. swordsman lv.2

-24 cards

Add:

Traps:

1 Torrential tribute

1 mirror force

2 waboku/threatening roar

2 bottomles trap hole

those are your traps now come up with some better ideas for the monsters and the spell cards.