Rate my yu-gi-oh deck..?

Question

hey,i'm a duelist from malaysia.here in my country,we played the OCG,not the TCG..please rate my new deck..

extra deck

3x F.G.D

2x Stardust Dragon

2x Red Daemon's Dragon

2x Black Rose Dragon

2x Dragon of the Ice Boundary

monsters

3x Red-eyes Darkness Metal Dragon

2x Blue Ice White Night Dragon

2x Devil King Dragon-Vandalgion

1x h**l Kaiser Dragon

1x Phantom Dragon

2x Blizzard Dragon

2x Mirage Dragon

3x Masked Dragon

1x Dol Dora (Twin-Headed Behemoth)

3x Bomber Dragon (Exploder Dragon)

1x Critter (Sangan)

1x Metamol Pod (Morphing Jar)

spells

1x Trade In

1x Hand Obliteration (Card Destruction)

1x Cyclone (Mystical Space Typhoon)

1x Heavy Storm

2x Stomping Crush (Stamping Destruction)

1x Early Burial (Premature Burial)

1x Raise Dead (Monster Reborn)

1x Brain Control

1x Future Fusion

1x Hurricane (Giant Trunade)

1x Rainbow Veil

1x Dragon's Mirror

traps

1x Holy Barrier-Mirror Force

1x Tidal Wave (Torrential Tribute)

3x Bribe of Demonic Palace (Dark Bribe)

3x Declaration of God (Solemn Judgment)

this deck is basically a beatdown/swarm deck.

the tuners are in my side deck.

my side deck is not yet completed.

Answer 1

not too shabby i like ure fusions

Answer 2

Luke,"L" is right.He is talking about Red-Eyes DARKNESS METAL Dragon http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Red-Eyes_Da... not Red-Eyes Black Metal Dragon http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Red-Eyes_Bl...

Answer 3

this deck is c**p how are u goign to have this

Red-eyes Darkness Metal Dragon

when u dont have meatalmorp

Answer 4

love it but i have all three god cards obelisk ,slifer, and ra name is nj please answer my question look for marylou cat lover

Answer 5

Sorry. 6/10. Nothing great

Where are the Armed Dragons? And why do your cards have funny names?

Anyway good luck with fixing your deck up.