Rate my yugioh deck please

Question

hi i made an other deck based on the dark emporer deck tell me what you think please thnx

total 44

monsters traps 11 spells 13

banisher of the radiance:bottomless trap hole:premature burial

helios the primordial sun:just desserts:mystical space typhoon

d.d.m different dimension master:ultimate offering:dark core

summoned skull:magic jammer:lightning vortex

bazoo the soul eater x2:sakuresta armour x3:big bang shot

golden homunculus:robbin goblin:d.d.r different dimension reincarnation

d.d survivor x2:karma cut:swords of revealing light

d.d warrior lady:d.d dynamite:reinforcement of the army

red eyes b dragon:return from the different dimension:brain control

double coston :dimensional fissure

the illusory gentleman : soul release

white horned dragon : dian keto the cure master

slate warrior

snipe hunter

exiled force

caius the shadow monarch

kycoo the ghost deystroyer

d.d assailant

Answer 1

next time, put ur lists vertically instead of horizantally

lose "dian keto the cure master"

add "treeborn frog" (u have a lot of tribute monsters)

add "monster reborn" (its limited not banned)

Answer 2

Not good..... Try this......

Monsters: 18

x3 Caius The Shadow Monarch

x1 Raiza

x1 Van'Dalgyon

x1 Dark Magician Of Chaos

x3 Cyber Valley

x3 D.D. Survivor

x2 D.D. Scout Plane

x2 Armageddon Knight

x2 Gravekeeper's Spy's

Spells: 12

x3 Dimensional Fissure

x2 Allure Of Darkness

x2 D.D.R.

x2 Enemy Controller

x2 Reinforcement Of The Army

x1 Brain Control

Traps: 10

x3 Solemn Judgement

x3 Macro Cosmos

x2 Dark Bribe

x1 Return From Different Dimension

x1 Torrential Tribute

Much better and way more playable. Make this deck and you will probably place, if not win a tournament.