Rate my yugioh deck!

Question

Well i would like more experienced people to answer abut anything is good This is my MILL/spawn deck (it you gove a decklist keep it mill or prove me wrong). Ill say some opening statements. I know i dont have il blud and mirror force. No solemn judgements and cyber dragons. And i know what a card trooper does. Rate it from 1-10

MONSTERS 19

x3 Mezuki

x3 Zombie Master

x3 Soul Absorbing Bone Tower

x3 Pyramid Turtle

x1 Goblin Zombie

x1 Ryu Kokki

x1 Despair From The Dark

x1 Vampire Lord

x1 Morphing Jar

x1 Sangan

x1 Spirit Reaper

MAGICS 14

x3 Book of Life

x1 Lighting Vortex

x1 Heavy Storm

x1 Nobleman of Crossout

x1 Mystical Space Typhoon

x1 Card of Safe Return

x1 Hand Descuction

x1 Pot of Avarice

x1 Smashing Ground

x1 Giant Trunade

x1 Monster Reborn

x1 Swords of revealing light

TRAPS 8

x1 Ceasefire

x1 Transmigration Propechy

x1 Dark Illusion

x1 Sakueratsu Armor

x1 Magic Cylinder

x1 Zoma the Spirit

x1 Draining Sheild

x1 Widespeard Ruin

Answer 1

instead of having despair from the dark take that out and put in an other vampire lord. And put in a few book of moons. Take out 1 soul of bone tower, if you want you can sub. it in for vampire curse. And put in a preimature burial. Side deck 2 pull under the rugs, a regieki break and 2 waboukus.

7/10

Answer 2

raigeki

raigeki breakX3

call of the mummy

card destruction

before:8.25

after:9.37

Answer 3

Your deck is zombie cool ! but it misses one great monster : Vampire genesis if you got it ur deck'll be great