Rate or fix my YU - GI - OH card deck!?

Question

non effect monsters: 7

Luster Dragon 3

Gemini Elf 3

Skull Dog Marron 1

Effect monsters:12

Mask Of Darkness 1

Medusa Worm 2

Great Maju Garzett 1

Gear Golem The Moving Fortress 1

Skilled Dark Magician 3

Exiled Force 1

Dark Driceratops 2

Cybernetic Magician 1

Trap cards: 9

Magic Cylinder 2

Call Of The Haunted 1

Sakuretsu Armor 1

Raigeki Break 1

Negate Attack 1

Shadow Spell 1

Ceasfire 1

Chain Disappearance 1

Spell cards: 15

Nobleman Of Extermination 1

Mage Power 2

Monster Reborn 1

Fissure 2

Change Of Hearts 1

Swords Of Revealing Light 1

Brain Control 1

Creature Swap 1

LIghting Vortex 2

Pot of Greed 1

Mystical Space Typhoon 2

= 43 Cards

Answer 1

its okay...

i would

+1 D.D. Warrior lady

-1 Luster dragon

+1 Drillroid

-3 Gemini Elf

+3 Gene-Warped Warwolf

-1 Skull Dog Marron

+1 Marshmallon

-2 Medusa Worm

+1 Swarm of Scarabs

+1 Man Eater Bug / Old Vindictive Mgician

-1 Great Maju Garzett

+1 Anciant Gear Beast

-2 Dark Driceratps

+2 Cais the Shadow Monarch

-1 Magic Cylender (its limited to one)

-1 Call of the haunted (BANNED)

-1 Sakurestsu Armor

+1 Mirror force

-1 Negate Attack

+1 Threataning roar

-1 Fissure (limited to one)

-1 Change of hearts (BANNED)

-1 Lightning Vortez (limited to one)

-1 Pot of Greed (BANNED)

-1 Mystical space typhoon (limited to one)

+1 Heavy Storm

+1 Smashing ground