Rate poem titled Incapable?

Question

I'm incapable of being loved .

Simply because I don't love myself .

Years of hiding in my own shadow .

Trying to bring up my self wealth .

I'm incapable being affectionate .

Affected by the ghost of the past,

Concrete wings of fate .

Cementing my path .

I'm incapable facing fears .

I refuse to look at such things,

Learning lessons always the hard way .

I wonder if I like the pain it brings .

I'm incapable to forget .

Memory once was my best friend .

Defending it like it took a breath .

I wish the struggle would end .

I'm incapable of sleep .

Restless, for I'm awake at all times .

Thought I was incapable of writing this,

Until I escaped and wrote these lines .

Answer 1

this poem is an 8.5/10. it is really descriptive. just make sure u make the words flow a little better. u dnt want to make the stanzas to long. otherwise, it'll take to long to read on afte another, and wont sound as good. but for the most part great job. you're obviously very gifted at writing! keep it up! :)

Answer 2

"Very nice". Both rhythms and words.

9.5.