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Rate these lyrics..........???

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This kinda just popped into my head while I was trying to sleep so its pretty rough but tell me what you think, be honest:

So many people say you should rhyme from the heart

So much locked inside, where the h**l do I start

My heart never really been a part of me

No emotion, always thinking logically, reason why they call me apathy

But pardon me, back to the story see, even to this day; you’ve had some kind of effect on me

Releasing emotions I never knew were a part of me, slowly corrupting me,

How the h**l did you get in I never gave you the key, or did I secretly

See, you were the one, the only one it wasn’t hard to see, supposedly

But I was blinded by my inability to see what was going on around me

Cause I loved you, but clearly you aint love me back

Took my heart and threw it back in my ******* face

And as much as I wanted to, you were the one I couldn’t replace

Years later, times changed and memories of you refuse to erase

But wait, after all we went through, I cant stop missing you

Its pitiful, what happened to the old me, when my mind was free

Of you, back when I was filled with apathy, when I had a heart that didn’t bleed

It was never really clear to me how much I really cared, till you walked away from me

Cause no one will ever mean what you mean to me, so why the h**l cant it ever just be you and me…..

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  1. Check mine-

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  2. only rwad first cupl of lines lol seems 2 much like a poem so 6

  3. i like music with meaning but you need to write in bars and some of your rhymes are choppy but other than that i liked it hey check me out i got a couple http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;... and http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;... and my newest one http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;...

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