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Question

In the distance,

Alone, standing there

What is it?

Is there any questions or replies?

Maybe a look

No, a stare

Unaware of the subject ,

Fainting in position

Never really caring ,

Anyways

Just trying to pass the time

Answer 1

hhhmmm? it doesn't really makes sense 2 me...only the beginning, change the "Is there any questions or replies?" to Are there any questions or replies

Answer 2

That is retarded, dont quit your day job, or night job

Answer 3

So there might be a grammatical error or two. When all you can comment on is the mechanics of the poem rather than the message it just goes to show that you aren't at the level to understand it.

I read the explanation and reread the poem. It makes perfect sense. its about how we fail to truly understand ourselves because we fear our mortality. I think thats true for a majority of the population. I appreciate it. Keep on.....!