Rate this freestyle!!?

Question

A Off the head freestyle. Just let me know what ya think

It has no certain bar ryhme.

(It doesnt has bars of 2 or 3 ryhmes its mxed)

Thannks

Why me? I ask alot,Not rap a alot but will leave a scar on yo face.

N!99@z best know they place,I aint come to race,but came to lay this S**t out. Its all bout paper now so n!99@ get on yo route. All I know is pain but its all in the game. Nothing to promse but lonely nights,bad times, thats why I talk about it in my ryhmes.

I been on the block,been in the trap, Ni99@s really thing they can make it out this S**t with rap?? The game s crazy but S**t dont phase me. I been here since the 80's baby,was a posterchild for a hustlers baby.

Answer 1

Yo i really liked it, naw i think it was sick

You got good taste in rhyming, just make it better a lil bit.

I'm not a freestyler but love to answer questions,

on the real you did ok. I JUST WANTED TO POP YOUR BUTTONS... work on it and i think you will be where ya headed. Call that your rough draft...lol  

Answer 2

Go BLSm00th, I like his answer and that guy under him sucks because anyone raps, not only blacks you Jacka$$

Answer 3

sux u aint even black... puerto ricans shuldnt rap

blacks are the best at rappin and i dont like puerto ricans shutup

Answer 4

if it was a "freestyle" maybe a 5 or 6, the last couple of lines were decent...now you on the other hand, i'd raise that number some spots

quit bein lazy lol

mmm..shoulda been in bed